
In The Theory of Moral Sentiments, Adam Smith used rules about writing as a metaphor for rules of conduct. He examines conduct by two different measures. In one measure, he considers what rules one would need to follow to, in my inelegant paraphrase, avoid being an actively scummy person. On the other hand, he also considers what rules of conduct one would need to observe to be a positively virtuous and praiseworthy person.
In the first case, the rules are fairly simple and straightforward. The rules needed to avoid being an actively awful person, in Smith’s view, “are accurate in the highest degree, and admit of no exceptions or modifications, but such as may be ascertained as accurately as the rules themselves, and which generally, indeed, flow from the very same principles with them.” To Smith, these rules are clear and straightforward, and when there are exceptions to these rules, the exceptions themselves will be equally clear and straightforward, and will embody the same ideas and principles as the rule itself.
Fulfilling these rules is a very low bar, Smith says. A person who does little more than minding their own business and keeping their hands to themselves may not inspire admiration, but their conduct “fulfils, however, all the rules of what is peculiarly called justice, and does every thing which his equals can with propriety force him to do, or which they can punish him for not doing. We may often fulfil all the rules of justice by sitting still and doing nothing.”
On the other hand, what about the rules one should follow if they want to do more than merely avoid being an actively vicious person? What rules of conduct should you follow if you want to be a virtuous person of good character, the kind of person who is deservedly praiseworthy? Smith says the “general rules of almost all the virtues, the general rules which determine what are the offices of prudence, of charity, of generosity, of gratitude, of friendship, are in many respects loose and inaccurate, admit of many exceptions, and require so many modifications, that it is scarce possible to regulate our conduct entirely by a regard to them.” Citing a rule about how one ought to express gratitude as a seemingly straightforward case, Smith says we find that with “the most superficial examination, however, this rule will appear to be in the highest degree loose and inaccurate, and to admit of ten thousand exceptions.”
And this leads to Smith’s analogy with the rules of writing. Smith says the rules of justice, the ones one must follow to avoid being a positive menace, “may be compared to the rules of grammar” and “are precise, accurate, and indispensable.” You either used the correct tense, or you didn’t. You matched your subject with your verb, or you didn’t. But merely producing grammatically correct writing doesn’t make one a great writer, just as “sitting still and doing nothing” does not make someone a praiseworthy and virtuous person. But in the domain of writing, when “critics lay down [rules] for the attainment of what is sublime and elegant in composition” we find these rules “are loose, vague, and indeterminate, and present us rather with a general idea of the perfection we ought to aim at, than afford us any certain and infallible directions for acquiring it.” This is also true of virtuous conduct – any rules or guidelines we might try to explicitly formulate will be loose, vague, and indeterminate. This doesn’t mean nothing useful can be said. But the rules of virtuous behavior are flexible and organic, rather than precise and algorithmic.
One of the most respected writers of the 20th century was George Orwell. In one of his more famous essays, Politics and the English Language, Orwell attempted to put out clear and straightforward rules for how to improve the quality of one’s writing. He lays out six rules. Here are the first five:
i. Never use a metaphor, simile or other figure of speech which you are used to seeing in print.
ii. Never use a long word where a short one will do.
iii. If it is possible to cut a word out, always cut it out.
iv. Never use the passive where you can use the active.
v. Never use a foreign phrase, a scientific word or a jargon word if you can think of an everyday English equivalent.
These seem to be rules that are like rules of grammar – precise and accurate. So did Orwell manage to crack the code, and create clear rules for sublime and elegant composition? No. His final rule is as follows:
vi. Break any of these rules sooner than say anything outright barbarous.
The best Orwell could do was say “Follow these rules to improve the quality of your writing, but in cases where following them produces poor writing just break the rules.” Even his rule about breaking the rules isn’t very specific – what exactly would make a bit of writing “barbarous” is certainly a loose, vague, and indeterminate guideline. To be clear, I think this is to Orwell’s credit – he recognized his inability to create rules that would always work and therefore his rules should not be treated as sacred or unbreakable.
What’s also interesting is that Orwell, like Smith, expected people to be able to recognize what is good or bad writing (or virtuous behavior) independently of the rules. Orwell’s final injunction is to break the rules when they produce bad writing. But how are we to know what constitutes bad writing? The answer can’t be whether or not the writing matches the rules – if that were the case, Orwell’s final rule would make no sense. Orwell, like Smith, understood that rules are but an imperfect attempt to describe an independently existing phenomenon – and that the reality of that phenomenon determines the rules rather than the other way around.
READER COMMENTS
nobody.really
Jun 20 2025 at 12:39pm
Perhaps Tolstoy would say that the sufficient are all alike; each superlative is superlative in its own way.
When I started reading this post, it hadn’t occurred to me that this would be one more element in the Fewer Rules, Better People series. I’m coming to appreciate a thesis: People can have an inter-subjective understanding of an idea, even when the the literal expression of the idea would contradict people’s understanding. Thus, efforts to express an idea literally may actually impede people’s understanding. As Twain remarked in A Connecticut Yankee in King Arthur’s Court (1889), “I hate explanations; they fog a thing up so that you can’t tell anything about it.”
(I vaguely recall Steven Landsburg saying that mathematicians feel this way–and that mathematical proofs were mostly a rigorous way to vindicate people’s intuititions and sense of “elegance.” In deductive logic, it’s possible to replace the statement [A or B] with the statement [(A and B) and (A and not B) and (B and not A)]. By rendering the term “or” superfluous, this method arguably makes deductive logic more “elegant”–except that logicians have an intuative understanding of “or,” and none of them regard the substitute language as elegant. Elegance is like pornography: We know it when we see it.)
Monte
Jun 20 2025 at 2:14pm
Haven’t all the great litterateurs broken the rules in pursuit of something more profound or original?
“Learn the rules like a pro, so you can break them like an artist.” – Picasso
nobody.really
Jun 21 2025 at 9:31am
Delightful quote. Anyone have a citation?
Mactoul
Jun 20 2025 at 9:38pm
Ebenezer Scrooge minded his own business and wanted nothing more than being left alone. But did he ” fulfill all the rules of justice “?
Jon Murphy
Jun 21 2025 at 9:35am
Yes. He was deficient in other virtues, but not justice.